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    我要一个用力的掌掴
    如同粗暴地破开一把锁
    撬开手指
    丢掉所有留恋 拥抱 亲吻 体温
     
    我的声音  怎么能对抗
    孤独，崩溃，酒精带来的确信？
    你
    在你面前
    我
    永远是 一个溃败的
    神
     
    我用什么来拥有你？
    我交付你我的寂寞 我的黑暗
    我心灵的虚空
    甚至是那并不存在的事物
    ——不存在的事物惟有一样
    那就是遗忘
     
    一千个同样的日落
    孤注一掷
    一个闲散的烟圈
    丈量出时间
    适合 闭上双眼
    想起
    那个夜晚
    消失在湮远年代的
    六月 二十三
     
    11:49 PM | Blog it

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    Picture of Anonymous
    yoyo wrote:
    你现在主要在这边写了哇？那我就把链接改了哈！
    Aug. 5
    捣练子 秋山wrote:
    不过你的东西总让人有许多感触
    压抑，郁闷，神经质
    其实人生本来痛苦，只不过我会给他戴上笑靥的面具罢了
    我曾经以为自己能遗忘，不过很多事，很多人，不想忘的，自然不会忘记；想忘的，也可能忘不了。
    哪天一定要写一篇和诗
     
    July 25
    捣练子 秋山wrote:
    “我要一个用力的掌掴
    如同粗暴地破开一把锁” 
    “我用什么来拥有你？”
    想起王尔凯为文纨小姐录的旧作
    “难道我监禁你，还是你霸占我？
    你闯进我的心，关上门又扭上锁”
    “一个闲散的烟圈”你要抽烟？宝鼎茶闲？篆炉沉香？犯了秋爽斋“科头坐”的毛病
    “六月 二十三”有点好笑
    整个诗让饱经沧桑满脸皱纹的Marguerite Duras小姐跃然纸上
    拜托，你才多少春秋？好好的女孩子，何苦把自己弄成鱼眼睛？
    春恨秋悲皆自惹~~
    总是想“拥有”，就总有“失去”的痛苦
    你好象永远俯视别人，溃败了也还是“神”？
    我读惯旧体诗词，对新诗不太懂，妄言几句~~
    July 25
    Bookwrote:
    一直没有读诗的天赋，所以不能完全理解作者的意味。但是读后总让人有一些凄楚。诗真的是可以怨？！
    今天路过“上海往事”，进去问了，你却已经离开，遗憾没能撞见！
    July 25

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